My topic for my essay will be on my cousin’s eighteenth birthday. What we did for his birthday was to get on a cruise to the Bahamas. This weekend trip with most of my family is filled with tons of different memories. The big thing that happened during this trip was a Jet Ski accident that happened when we were on the island. It’s because of this crash that I want to write the essay on it. I think it would be great to find some sort of change that happened to me because of this accident. Everyone was at fault for the crash, everyone felt guilty for what happened. Thankfully the only real injure was on my just turned eighteen cousin who fractured his leg. He had to spend the rest of the trip on a wheelchair. This somewhat ruined the trip but since this was the first time most of us have been on a cruise ship it was still exciting.
Also during this trip we meet new people, saw a great island, and had tons of fun. So I’m probably going to write about this trip as a whole and not focus greatly on one part because I can’t really remember very thing that happened. So I would have to say that the only real question I have for this essay is; how did this whole experience change me into who I am today?
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Luis,
Your topic will have to get at some realization. Remember that it is not just a "what I did on vacation" essay. Instead, you purpose is to explore the memory and discover something--this is the most important part.
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